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30th March – Article proof reading
Matt L and I also wanted to proof read the article once more before handing it in, and as we had looked at it so much and would be less likely to notice little mistakes, we asked kirk to look through the article, (shown below) and give us some proof re...
Plan – Completion of articles
Due to the lack of time, we where unable to create the flat plan due to the simple fact that people were unable to complete their articles in this mornings session (10.50 - 12.20) so therefore people are working on them now in this session (2.40 - 4.10...
Whole article in template
This is the current version of Tara and my article, in the template with images and such, it's going in for proof reading tomorrow so we may have further changes to make.
Action Plan 1
Here is the action plan that I created for the first week of the project.
Tuesday 30/03/2010 – Formatting The Article
Today I have started to do more formatting to the article, as the crossheads look a bit squashed into the main body, which people thought that this didn't look that good, so i decided to reformat the crossheads to give it more space.I then decided to r...
Final rough Flatplan draft – Video
Here is our final rough draft flat plan before we get feedback from Jenny and Pete about what to cut out from the article. From looking at the flat plan, we can see that we have one spare page left with 3 potential articles too which all fill a page, a...
Feedback On My Draft Article
Here is a screengrab of the feedback that Philippa gave me upon reading the first draft of my article. Here is the feedback that I received. Breaking down your article in to sections really helps the reader to understand- You used the thriller openin...
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Feedback On Philippa's Draft Article
Here are screengrabs of the feedback that I gave to Philippa on the first draft of her article.
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