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Thursday 18/03/2010
Today i gave the feedback to Mike and Loz, but Loz wasn't in today so he didn't recieve my feedback, but unfortnantly he had feedback from my article also so i didn't get any from himI was given some feedback from Philippa and Mike, Philippas was in al...
Feedback For Mike, Tara and Matt L
Throughout this week we have been producing our articles and giving others feedback on their drafts. I taken a version of Mike's article and also Matt and Tara's article, read through them and give them feedback. As I wasn't present in college today, I...
Feedback From Jenny
After we had produced our first draft of each of our articles, we gave a PDF to Alex and he sent all of them to Jenny. She then replied and gave us all feedback on what she thought of our articles and how we could improve on them. Below is the email th...
Feedback from Jenny our client
A very promising start – but across the board, some problems in the balance of information and opinion. You really need to start from thinking about the essential information your readers are going to need for the purposes of the exam (Matt and ...
Mike's feedback from rough article
Here is the feedback Mike gave Tara and I about our article:Questions that need addressing1) Article Title?2) What is BBC iplayer? - As Jenny said, we have to assume that not everyone has heard of these, explain the background of them all.3) You coul...
Mike – One of the Quality Control Leaders
Mike has read through my blog work that I have produced so far and has given me some feedback for what he thinks of it and how he thinks I can improve. Below is the feedback that he has sent me via email."1) You have blogged about the brief, but have n...
Feedback From Mike on My Second Draft Article